Hello
In terms of scene selection, it was not too bad, you had some nice impacts and most phases have been dealt a bit differently which is nice. But visually, it's a bit too messy, the color correction is quite obnoxious and too dominant, the cam moves are not well thought-out, you have some contradictory movements going on at several points and you even used bouncing to synch which totally broke your flow. As Luna said, eye transitions are not looking good, you do them on scenes with almost no movement. Masks could also have been a lot cleaner. Around 1:25 the scene selection is nice but it's hindered by the amount of black fades you do.
So yeah, not a bad video but with too many issues, I wish it was a bit more rigorous and thorough on FX. Keep it up!