Hello,
The video had a good association and could have looked really cool but in this case the pace was too linear, it was hard to feel any big variation between the main two phases of the song. Besides that, some fx looked quite bad, with most cam moves zooming in random spots or big blurs for no reason at 55s. In terms of editing, scene selection was a bit inconsistent, mostly in how you chain your scenes, I feel like it was lacking in variety and cam management, like you had dynamic scenes cut by really static ones and stuff like that.
Not especially bad but the flow was too linear and with some video killers that dragged you down.But keep it up!!
![[Action] Terrae - The King's Crown Empty](https://2img.net/i/fa/empty.gif)
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Sat 7 Mar 2020 - 5:44
