Hello!
I liked it, it has a lot of energy overall, but maybe just a bit too much haha. The pace is very fast, even in calm parts the flow is nice but always feels a bit too fast. But at least scene selection could make so it was easy to distinguis between choruses and calm parts so it was not too distracting for me. However you also tried to put quite a lot of transitions and small stuff in your videos and not everything worked well, for example this black/reversed effect(?) at 51s which looks like a glitch pretty much. I also feel like the glowing eyes needed a better implementation.
It overall feels like it needed a bit more of control! But it was an enjoyable ride, good job and keep it up!