Hello
The video has some nice parts but felt inconsistent and lacked coherence. The association is a bit surprising and some FX come really out of place like the texts or the glitch backgrounds and on top of that they are quite messy. I also have issues with the overlay scenes you did, it usually doesn't blend well. But again, some parts were really on point, like around 1:13, the atmosphere was well captured. Unfortunately that didn't make me completely involved because of all the small mistakes, the overload of fades and overall lack of cleanliness.
Still a decent job, keep it up!