Hello,
Quite a solid work, the raw editing is good and easy to follow, impacts are hitting home, I'd only complain a bit about the amount of black fades in the beginning. I enjoyed your little glitch, distortion effects and FX work in general, they were subtle and well implemented.
So yeah, sure it wasn't the most innovating association but it works really well and your editing is very nice here, I enjoyed it!
Good luck!