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PostSubject: Re: [Psyche] Eazy - Gaze   [Psyche] Eazy - Gaze Icon_minitimeSun 17 Mar 2019 - 11:02

Hello!

Not bad, the idea was fresh and I liked how you implemented the eyes in the different scenes. Pace was also nice. I have a bit more issues with the transitions, especially the "seamless" transition that stand out too much imo and are not used in a very consistent way. Sometimes you zoom in a random position or you make an internal movement stop by slapping a cam move transition over it. That hurts the flow imo.
Also the mix of anime was not very homogeneous I think, the choice of anime was ok but the scenes were not linked enough in both atmosphere and movement/positioning.

I don't want to sound too critical though because it was honestly quite cool to watch, I enjoyed but I think it could have been miles better with a more solid editing! Still cool, good job!

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