Hello
It was not bad but a bit messy, there are a lot of fades and FX trials, like pixelated glitches and negative stuff, it just all feel a bit heterogeneous. I think you should have tried to focus on a more unified aesthetic throughout the video.
Concept wise, I think it was not completely obscure but also a bit hard to understand, like the crossover idea at the beginning didn't come back so much later. I think most of the video is a flashback of the beginning? Well overall it could have been clearer and maybe simpler.
The project seemed a bit too ambitious in both narratives and FX for the amount of time you had, it came out nice but a bit messy in all parts. Good job and good luck nevertheless!