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PostSubject: Re: [Drama] WPTiara - Drifting Away   [Drama] WPTiara - Drifting Away Icon_minitimeSat 7 Mar 2020 - 12:19

Hello,

The video has quite clearly conveyed the feelings needed, it was easy to get invested into the story told. I enjoyed how bright the c/c was overall, it brought some nice personalization but what bothered me a bit more were those additive fades you add quite often, it usually just makes everything a bit messier. I think opting for cuts would most of the times be a better and cleaner choice. Apart from that, scene selection was cool and pace also well managed overall, impacts helped breaking the monotony and you had a good narration. The "fear of letting go" is taken a bit TOO literally with this final scene but it's fine haha, I just thought the scene where he tries to save her was a bit too long, it's almost 30s.

Good job overall, but really wished it was relying on a bit cleaner editing! Keep it up o/
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PostSubject: Re: [Drama] WPTiara - Drifting Away   [Drama] WPTiara - Drifting Away Icon_minitimeSat 7 Mar 2020 - 18:33

A nice cute video actually
I enjoyed the atmosphere of it, but sometimes it felt a bit slow, I blame it on the song but I think with some better editing it could have been more interesting on some parts, but still good job here!
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feels and cuteness <3 good job !
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