Hello!
That was a hard one to rank. I really enjoyed the first part, especially the typography and small comps you incorporated. Some masks were a bit rough but it didn't really bother me. I was a bit more though with the particles at 1:14 for example, it didn't look really clean and from thereon, the scene selection got way less interesting by focusing on those death parade games, it made the flow more repetitive and since there aren't as many FX, the whole looked less consistent. Even the comps are looking a bit cheaper, I would guess it has to do with the 3 days coming short but yeah. It gets better again from 1m46 on though!
So basically, the video felt quite inconsistent and a bit rushed in parts. Adding to that some messier comps and I couldn't really put it above other videos that had this consistency and were overall cleaner in their risks. Still a creative and interesting work, keep it up!