Can't watch yet, because....spoilers. but I'm sure it's good xD I'll come back later

The action part feels off from the song and category, you had a good beginning but then it feels like we are not in horror anymore. Also the pace and sync are weak on some parts but I wish you good luck in the ranking!

Hello,

For the most part I agree with what Luna said. First 30 seconds looked ok but then the scenes became more and more static and/or random and that killed the mood you were setting. Overall the video looks kinda flat, I would say it needed more thoughts on scene selection, more rigor on synchs and camera management and maybe a light color correction or personalization of some sort.
No big mistake in terms of visuals or anything though, so it's already something. Keep it up!