Editor: Sempai3607 Team: Homeless Anime: Fate Stay Night Unlimited Blade Works, Mahou Tsukai no Yome Song: ZAYDE WOLF - Rule The World (Generdyn REMIX)
I generally liked the amv, especially the first part "crossover" which is clean and clear. I had more trouble with the dynamic parts on which I expected a little more impact. That's why I feel that with the music and the way you edited the amv it looks more like a trailer or a drama video than an action clip.
Special mention for the part from 1min00 to 1min30
Sempai3607 Soul's Team
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I generally liked the amv, especially the first part "crossover" which is clean and clear. I had more trouble with the dynamic parts on which I expected a little more impact. That's why I feel that with the music and the way you edited the amv it looks more like a trailer or a drama video than an action clip.
Special mention for the part from 1min00 to 1min30
Well about trailer i agree but why is it bad? I mean you guys think action is only about fighting with electro or rock music? Ofc my work cant fight in dynamic with electro or rock music but i got other type of the song actually. Judges put this into packs so i think for my song i have good dynamic (could be sometimes slow but not critically i think) And yea i cant explain my storyline in amv if all scenes will change in 0.2 seconds. Idk its the way how i edit. but thank you for opinion
Zuuki Forum Regular
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sat 9 Mar 2019 - 11:24
Well, it seems you were right !
Prediction:
I didn't seen it coming, congratulations Sempaï ! There were a lot of Fate amv in this contest, but yours is the cleanest for sure I appreciated your crossover idea, it works very well, and the editing is pretty awesome ! I think the first part is better than the second, especially the finish with the ECLIPSE arrival cause I didn't seen any winner of the battle and I want to KNOW !
Btw, it's a great work,very epic you did the job well
Sempai3607 Soul's Team
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sat 9 Mar 2019 - 12:26
Nyala wrote:
Well, it seems you were right !
Prediction:
I didn't seen it coming, congratulations Sempaï ! There were a lot of Fate amv in this contest, but yours is the cleanest for sure I appreciated your crossover idea, it works very well, and the editing is pretty awesome !
Btw, it's a great work,very epic you did the job well
Thank you Nyala, its means a lot for me.
Nyala wrote:
I think the first part is better than the second, especially the finish with the ECLIPSE arrival cause I didn't seen any winner of the battle and I want to KNOW !
hahah actually it was my idea let people think who will win. Its like some trailer stuff or something like that.
Luciole Berserk
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sat 9 Mar 2019 - 12:51
So cool to see you in this cate after all this time.
You did great on this one, the association music/anime is really cool, as zuuki said, it change from the classic action vids we have.
The little crossover with this fucking skeleton dat we see everywhere is perfect, really nice utilisation from an overuse source.
Not fan of the white kanji behind Archer (ten years later), i think its too bright compare to the rest of the scene but its detail (maybe put it in other mode with the background smoke on it who can incrust it better idk..).
Anyway good job and congrats for the top 2, that was great
Sempai3607 Soul's Team
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sat 9 Mar 2019 - 13:34
Luciole wrote:
The little crossover with this fucking skeleton dat we see everywhere
FUCKING SKELETON haha and thank you
lokkiclu Soul's Team
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sat 9 Mar 2019 - 17:27
I've already talked too much but seriously Dima this came out so freaking well, you dared to go for a more unconventional style of action editing and it paid off immensely. The atmosphere is cinematic, stylish and your source picks were smart for it. It's unlucky however that Mahoutsukai ended up being the flavour of this IC haha but there's that
Overall my personal favourite in action, GJ and go make us more vids
Hedge Forum Member
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sun 10 Mar 2019 - 2:25
I've always really appreciated your AMVs :c
Glad you didn't finish 21st this time! I like the editing and the crossover looks really great. Well done for second place and look forward to seeing your next projects!
Sempai3607 Soul's Team
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Subject: Re: [Action] Sempai3607 - ECLIPSE Sun 10 Mar 2019 - 19:10
Hedge wrote:
I've always really appreciated your AMVs :c
Glad you didn't finish 21st this time! I like the editing and the crossover looks really great. Well done for second place and look forward to seeing your next projects!
thank you Hedge, glad you like it
lokkiclu wrote:
I've already talked too much but seriously Dima this came out so freaking well, you dared to go for a more unconventional style of action editing and it paid off immensely. The atmosphere is cinematic, stylish and your source picks were smart for it. It's unlucky however that Mahoutsukai ended up being the flavour of this IC haha but there's that
Overall my personal favourite in action, GJ and go make us more vids
haha yea thank you, once again. For me its really strange that "fucking skeleton" and fate was so popular this year If i take pokemen next year then i guess everyone will use it. strange coincidences
Next year amv about 21th place
MagicDarkLight Berserk
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This is better than your Reborn amv o___O Joke aside, really impressive crossover, the comps are so clean during this fire part, even the aesthetic of the "10 years after" it's very classy and cool. Everything up to this point was top notch. Narration was also quite clear and yeah, very impressed you managed such clean implementation within an anime like Fate which is so over the top with colors and FX in general.
What dragged you down a bit was definitely the last chorus, even in terms of flow and dynamics, it wasn't really impressive and really felt long to watch after the awesome first part. That's an IC for you and I get that it works in your story-telling but from a viewer point of view, it looks a bit dull.
But one of the most ambitious action amv I've seen in this IC since 10 years ago, great job.