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Pretty cool man, I think there are some mistake like your glitch VFX, text, or noise effect cause they aren't pretty aesthetic.
Also your editing is really dynamic but there are sometimes synchronisation missing.

It's a cool edit, think about clean your work for the next time, good job Smile
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Nyala wrote:
Pretty cool man, I think there are some mistake like your glitch VFX, text, or noise effect cause they aren't pretty aesthetic.
Also your editing is really dynamic but there are sometimes synchronisation missing.

It's a cool edit, think about clean your work for the next time, good job Smile


Thanks for your advice!Very Happy
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dude pretty good work actually, good job
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] Garrysheen-Mayhem   [Action] Garrysheen-Mayhem Icon_minitimeMon 11 Mar 2019 - 21:15

Hello!

Overall you understand what needs to be done, the scene selection isn't bad, calm scenes go where they shoudl and build up scenes work fine. But the synch isn't excellent, most sounds are hit a bit too shallowly and as a viewer you expect a real connection between the scene and the beats. And so your video just lack in some impacts that were heavily expected.

It's a solid video, but I think your anime could have offered more fitting synchro, I agree with Nyala on the FX part also, some glitches could look more pro! Good job nevertheless
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