garrysheen
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 Messages : 18 Registration date : 2018-02-25 ![[Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen Empty](https://2img.net/i/fa/empty.gif) |  Subject: [Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen ![[Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_minitime.gif) Wed 3 Mar 2021 - 18:18 | |
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MagicDarkLight
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  Messages : 2082 Age : 30 Location : BELGIUM Registration date : 2007-08-22 | | Subject: Re: [Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen Thu 4 Mar 2021 - 0:06 | |
| Hey!
Not bad, the editing was pretty solid. In terms of FX, I appreciated the efforts but the 2D overlays are a bit in your face, they could have been implemented better imo. Colors are also a bit bland, I think a little bit more contrast would have helped.
Good luck! |
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garrysheen
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Messages : 18 Registration date : 2018-02-25 | | Subject: Re: [Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen Thu 4 Mar 2021 - 18:46 | |
| - MagicDarkLight wrote:
- Hey!
Not bad, the editing was pretty solid. In terms of FX, I appreciated the efforts but the 2D overlays are a bit in your face, they could have been implemented better imo. Colors are also a bit bland, I think a little bit more contrast would have helped.
Good luck! thx ![[Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen 1f60c](https://2img.net/i/fa/twemoji/16x16/1f60c.png) |
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Nyala
Soul's Team
 Messages : 5553 Age : 34 Location : Paris, France. Registration date : 2007-12-06 | | Subject: Re: [Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen Sat 6 Mar 2021 - 17:03 | |
| Hello there, that's a pretty cool entry. I'll say the same about the 2D VFX, I recognize them, they are not really adjustable but you added them reasonably. I wished your final drop was edited with more rythme than the rest of your clip, but it's still solid, nice work man well done ![[Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen 3772035131](/users/3312/50/40/14/smiles/3772035131.gif) |
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Hedge
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 Messages : 135 Age : 26 Location : Le dernier homme sur terre est seul dans une chambre et quelque chose cogne à la porte.. Registration date : 2014-02-24 | | Subject: Re: [Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen Thu 11 Mar 2021 - 6:21 | |
| As MDL said the effects could be better integrated into the whole, I like the connections between the shots anyway. You did a good research of scenes and the editing is well done!
I like the AMV, however I find the end a little too abrupt.
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