It was really cool (like always) Lis, good jooooob YEY

Nice

As always I like your style! It's a bit slow sometimes but it did not stop me to enjoy it

Good luck!

Hello

I didn't like it, the audio cuts were terrible imo. The colors are fully monochromatic and destroys the black and contrasts most of the time. Most of the FX are actually too exagerated, like the noise or the rough cam moves. Regarding the pace, it's not too bad in the last part, despite being a bit slow but the first part is overpaced with a very fast steam of scenes and many cam moves for no reason.

So yeah, not a fan of this one, good luck in the contest

MagicDarkLight wrote:

Hello

I didn't like it, the audio cuts were terrible imo. The colors are fully monochromatic and destroys the black and contrasts most of the time. Most of the FX are actually too exagerated, like the noise or the rough cam moves. Regarding the pace, it's not too bad in the last part, despite being a bit slow but the first part is overpaced with a very fast steam of scenes and many cam moves for no reason.

So yeah, not a fan of this one, good luck in the contest

First of thank you for your feedback. I don't think my audio cuts were terrible but I can see and hear that it would've been better if I had kept the song more as it was originally. As for the monochromatic parts, some of the scenes itself were already very much one-color but I do agree that it is too desaturated and the contrast and white balance are off for the video as a whole (I should've checked it on another moniter). For the story I wanted to portray I needed the scenes in the first half but I can see now that I could've done a lot of things better when it comes to pacing.

What can I say this vid was an experiment for me, I think you'd like my previous edits more than this one.
Thanks for taking the time to comment and I'll take your feedback into consideration with every next project : ).