Hey!
Very interesting, I enjoyed it, especially the middle part where it's a bit raw, it's obvious you don't neglect basics over your FX. I enjoyed the FX work as well, it is pretty good but I don't think it always fitted the mood you were trying to set. Also, it's good to personalize the source a bit but imo the RGB split and CC lens at 47s were a bit too strong for no reason.
Good luck in the contest