I liked it, the lighting effects and beat sync were nice, tho the artifacts didn't really fit in well with the rest of the video in my opinion. Also the girl from bakemonogatari, girls with red hair and some other filler scenes bothered me, because they were confusing for the story, would've been better if you made their hair brown/blended them in more subtle. This is just all my personal opinion ofcourse, it's still a very good amv with good use of boku : )