Wildly I hurried and all the same I didn't manage to complete, the computer weak malfunctions everything)... In general pleasant viewing, can to whom it will be pleasant:) (translator)

Not really like, you put the action in the quiet parts. ca lack of variation as I think.

good luck

Hello!

I think the same as Irany, you didn't follow the pace of the song enough and moreover the mix of animes wasn't good, this look almost like a mep, you should mix them more (and try to harmonize it better too). The beginning was especially average, too much fades and accelerations in my opinion.

But anyways, good luck!