Subject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation Mon 25 Feb 2013 - 23:45
Not bad but it lacks transitions/impact ...
Drango New
Messages : 2 Registration date : 2013-02-24
Subject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation Tue 26 Feb 2013 - 1:08
Draga wrote:
Not bad but it lacks transitions/impact ...
If you could elaborate with some suggestions to how I could improve, that would be wonderful.
MagicDarkLight Berserk
Messages : 2082 Age : 30 Location : BELGIUM Registration date : 2007-08-22
Subject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation Fri 1 Mar 2013 - 19:28
Hi!
I agree with Draga, you could have speeded up a little during the chorus, it was kinda slow, too much cuts too and your cam moves could have been cleaner if you had used better the blur. It's not "bad", but it's just not really interesting since there're so many cuts and a little boring because we're never totally amazed by your flow of scenes since that's too slow
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Mon 25 Feb 2013 - 0:06
