DΛRKVD New
Messages : 5 Age : 25 Location : Russia Registration date : 2021-02-23 | Subject: [Action] DarkVoodoo - Black Flame Tue 8 Mar 2022 - 10:54 | |
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MagicDarkLight Berserk
Messages : 2082 Age : 30 Location : BELGIUM Registration date : 2007-08-22 | Subject: Re: [Action] DarkVoodoo - Black Flame Tue 8 Mar 2022 - 11:00 | |
| Hello!
Pretty solid editing, the flow and impacts are cool and you had some nice comps here and there to keep it fresh. I'm just not a fan of some overlays that you used as backgrounds of some masks, like the things from Ao no exorcist are a bit overused at this point and it makes your comps feel less personal imo.
But cool job anyways, good luck! |
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DΛRKVD New
Messages : 5 Age : 25 Location : Russia Registration date : 2021-02-23 | Subject: Re: [Action] DarkVoodoo - Black Flame Tue 8 Mar 2022 - 18:17 | |
| - MagicDarkLight wrote:
- Hello!
Pretty solid editing, the flow and impacts are cool and you had some nice comps here and there to keep it fresh. I'm just not a fan of some overlays that you used as backgrounds of some masks, like the things from Ao no exorcist are a bit overused at this point and it makes your comps feel less personal imo.
But cool job anyways, good luck! Hello Thanks, initially I wanted to make the background myself in less dynamic moments and cut out a lot more masks, but because of the high temperature, I just couldn’t do it. Although it looks like an excuse hehe Sorry |
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Li0n New
Messages : 56 Registration date : 2018-02-02 | Subject: Re: [Action] DarkVoodoo - Black Flame Sat 12 Mar 2022 - 9:58 | |
| Hello there!! Not a bad video! I think you were unlucky that many people used this song and anime together, you could have ranked higher if it was the only one. Some pointers, the pacing at 0:28 - 0:34 felt off and not interesting enough but it seems it got better later on. I think the text usage was unnecessary and it could have been better to use that time for 1-2 more comps. Lastly, in the end, the text seemed really out of place because the action had not ended and the chorus part of the song was still playing. It would have made the end of the video more impactful, while you could present the video info in an outro after the end of the song. Good job overall and good luck with your next projects! |
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