Hi!
Good job for not dropping first of all! The video was cool, you went for a slow and deep pace, some impacts are really nice. I felt some slow down at times though and not all cuts were satisfying in terms of flow. I also think you had a more ambitious vision of the FX because of the beginning but you didn't have the time to implement it as you wished. So that's still a good IC but as you said, it feels like it could have been more, I enjoyed it nevertheless.
Good job and good luck!