Hello!
Hahah glad I encouraged you to post (and let's hope I'm not the only one to comment).
As usual, I think you have quite an interesting take on your sources. This time is not really an exception, the scene selection is quite consistent and I find the mix works quite well. But as you said, time seemed to have overcome you, especially this end, which is surprisingly loosely working.
What was missing the most to me was transitions, the cuts were sometimes hard to buy, most obvious example would be at 46s, the switch in the songs is welcome by a lip flap and a quite flashy scene that comes back later but between them you have those bland scenes where Mob gets attacked, it's quite hard to make the parallel here and overall it just lacks a lot in energy.
In contrast, I think best part would be around 33s, you're building a theme and put some scenes that not only fit your theme but also the sounds.
Honestly it's a bit weird to comment it, it looks more like a beta than an actually finished video, it had some potential but it's way too rushed unfortunately. Still, good luck!