The video is enjoyable, quite a crazy-paced editing that fits the song but it still was a bit too messy with the sped-up scenes and the shakes, I think you could have toned it down a bit without losing the flow you were going for. I still had my fun watching it, so good job and good luck!
Nyala Soul's Team
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Subject: Re: [Action] - YinYang (Dona Morte) Sat 6 Mar 2021 - 12:54
Oh damn a 3min edit, you guys love problems x)
This kinda good, like MDL said the overspeeding of some scenes is quite weird. You should put less Twitch FX on your editing too, or the up light effect you're used. I'm also not a big fan of the chromatic abberation, this make your fight scenes difficult to see. This anime is strong enought to edit it by a simple way, if you work more on your editing I clearly think you could be improve your work. Bravo for your entry and keep continue
Hedge Forum Member
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Really cool, as MDL said it's sometimes a bit weird between the acceleration of some shots and the twitch/shake but otherwise the anime lends itself well to this kind of music and some phases of the AMV work really well.
I found some effects a bit strange like the hand masked at 1:30 with shots changing behind but nothing really bad.