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PostSubject: action Elia   action Elia Icon_minitimeSat 6 Mar 2021 - 17:42

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PostSubject: Re: action Elia   action Elia Icon_minitimeSat 6 Mar 2021 - 18:28

Hello

Sport various are always cool! I enjoyed the intensity in this one, impacts were cool and the change of pace too. In terms of comp, it wasn't bad but it felt a bit random at time and I also had the same feeling with the scene selection at times, I wish your FX were a bit more helpful to make all the anime blend together better. I also noticed a watermark from 1:33 that should have been hidden.

Good job though, it was nice!
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PostSubject: Re: action Elia   action Elia Icon_minitimeSun 7 Mar 2021 - 16:57

Oh this one is very dynamic, I liked it ! Not so much to say, for me you sould remove the dark shadow on your rotos in front of your compositions cuz this is not very aesthetic, or by removed the blur effect could be more effective.
Your audio quality sounds like be smothered, not like the original file from the music pack. Be careful of your audio quality during the mastering.

Really good work you can be proud action Elia 3772035131
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PostSubject: Re: action Elia   action Elia Icon_minitimeThu 11 Mar 2021 - 6:32

Wow, I love your choice of scene. The clip blasts through, it's powerful and works well with the music. It may lack a little touch up in the colors and movement in the picture on some moments but it's not that bad.
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