Hello

The concept was cool, I think you did a good job with tracking and the actual typo was accurate with Death Note's original design. But apart from that, the technical part was lacking a bit, some masks are really easy to spot because of lack of work on colors and lighting, the editing in itself is a bit lackluster, many scenes feel too static and/or long. And also, if you want to go for this kind of cinema format, you shouldn't encode your video with the black bands but make it actually the size you want to use.

Interesting work nevertheless, good job and good luck!

Thanks MDL