Mapleleaf New
Messages : 3 Registration date : 2020-03-05 | Subject: 【Action】Maple leaf-武士 Tue 2 Mar 2021 - 7:34 | |
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MagicDarkLight Berserk
Messages : 2082 Age : 30 Location : BELGIUM Registration date : 2007-08-22 | Subject: Re: 【Action】Maple leaf-武士 Tue 2 Mar 2021 - 21:35 | |
| Hello,
Your fx work is quite original, but I think it was too rough. It could be a lot cleaner. Color correction is also a bit too monochromatic and bland. The end of the video was very slow and the change of anime felt random. I didn't really like it sorry.
Good luck in the contest. |
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Nyala Soul's Team
Messages : 5553 Age : 34 Location : Paris, France. Registration date : 2007-12-06 | Subject: Re: 【Action】Maple leaf-武士 Sat 6 Mar 2021 - 11:08 | |
| Oh damn, I was really hyped during the first part of your amv, it was really nice I love it ! But at 1:22 your editing is going down like you didn't had not more time to finish it, what's happened ? Iron Chef deadline issue I guess :') If the entire clip was edited like during the first part, it would be clearly dope, that's pitty, but still a great entry for me, nice job man |
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Hedge Forum Member
Messages : 135 Age : 26 Location : Le dernier homme sur terre est seul dans une chambre et quelque chose cogne à la porte.. Registration date : 2014-02-24 | Subject: Re: 【Action】Maple leaf-武士 Thu 11 Mar 2021 - 4:42 | |
| As MDL and Nyala said, the beginning is better than the end. I guess you ran out of time.
It's always nice to see an amv on this film. I liked the little attempts to give a special look with the black stripes. It works pretty well in the beginning but the second time it's really not well done. To tell the truth, I think that putting it only at the beginning would have been better, I don't understand the interest of putting it back in the middle of the amv.
Your rhythm is much less good at the second part, at the beginning of the amv it's ok, I like the little colos that you added.
It's ok but it could have been better! See you next time!
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