Video: Far Away From Fair
Category: Drama
Anime: Fate/stay night: Unlimited Blade Works (TV), Fate/stay night: Unlimited Blade Works 2 (TV), Fate/stay night: Heaven's Feel I. presage flower (movie)
Song: No Time To Die
Artist: Billie Eilish
Creator: DarknessTheWarrior

I really like the mood of it, just bothered by the different zoom at 1:43 and after, but overall nice edit

Luna wrote:

I really like the mood of it, just bothered by the different zoom at 1:43 and after, but overall nice edit

Thank you for the feedback, i really appreciate it

Hello

I could tell you tried to do it well but there were a lot of technical mistakes in this. First of all the constant fades were not helping the video and made it messier than it should be. The format changes were quite random and the movements you gave to the bar was a bit all over the place. At 30s I don't really know what happened but the chin was glitching. As for pace and scene selection, it was ok in the beginning but as the song was building up, it stayed very flat and the shaking you add was easy to spot. The final part is full of transitions that are wrong in terms of camera management as it goes in and out in a short period and not clean because of the many fades and blurs.

I feel like it could have been a lot better by just restraining yourself a bit on fades and focus a bit more on the overall flow, but it's not an easy song to edit to. Keep it up!!

MagicDarkLight wrote:

Hello

I could tell you tried to do it well but there were a lot of technical mistakes in this. First of all the constant fades were not helping the video and made it messier than it should be. The format changes were quite random and the movements you gave to the bar was a bit all over the place. At 30s I don't really know what happened but the chin was glitching. As for pace and scene selection, it was ok in the beginning but as the song was building up, it stayed very flat and the shaking you add was easy to spot. The final part is full of transitions that are wrong in terms of camera management as it goes in and out in a short period and not clean because of the many fades and blurs.

I feel like it could have been a lot better by just restraining yourself a bit on fades and focus a bit more on the overall flow, but it's not an easy song to edit to. Keep it up!!  

Thank you for taking the time to write me a review, I know that being a judge you don't have all the time in the world, but even so you tried hard to write me something, I really thank you, this will help me to improve in my next videos