Hey Nico!
I liked the video but especially the first part. In this new version you have even added some more cool FX well implemented, like this "thunder" comp which is pretty cool. I also like the BUMP lyric synch as well as the lip at 0:54.
However I felt like the synch was somehow a bit under what it should have been. Some impacts are really nice but some stuff are quite obviously omitted where you'd expect a bit more change. For example at 23s or 1:30 and some more where it feels a bit delayed (for example around 33s).
On top of that, in the second part, the action becomes really messy, I know the anime is like that but at some point it just feels too abstract. The colors also look a bit bland and the ending with a fade as audio cut is a bit abrupt, especially in the contest version.
So... yeah, there are quite some issues preventing the video to get higher. It was a small category so stuff like that can drag you down quick but at the same time I know you didn't have a lot of time, so it's a pity because I think the video had potential and I initially put it some places higher in my personal ranking. I feel like the theme leaning too much towards action (and messiness of the anime) also got you in trouble. Still a good job man, keep it up!!