Hello,
I couldn't really enjoy the video. Even if we forget about the category that was absent except a bit for the "dark" part in the beginning, I didn't find it especially well edited. There are quite a lot of messy comps and transitions, masks with rough edges and even lip flaps. During the action part, synch is a bit off, impacts are kind of shallow, especially the first one has almost no energy. Also the other animes you've added are easy to spot. As for color correction, it just looked washed out and made the video even more dull imo.
It is definitely not as terrible as I make it sound in this comment and I am sorry for that but we all know you are capable of much better work so it's hard to let slip all these things. It's quite obvious in the ranking that we still appreciated the video to some level, it was ok but could have been a lot better. Keep it up!