Hello,
The video had redeeming qualities but felt quite inconsistent in terms of pace and the last 15s looked really rushed and unsatisfying with those long scenes. In terms of FX, it's also going up and down, some comps and transitions look really cool and then you have those ugly masks like at 25s and 28s. Apart from that, you are missing some synch and scene selection in the first part feels very opening-based and not much interesting. I enjoyed the part at 1:11 but it was quite risky as you do a lot of overlays and it lasts quite long.
So it was a bit hard to rank, on one hand it has some interesting and creative work, on the other it has some obvious problems and it feels a bit lacking in scene selection. Keep it up!!
Thu 5 Mar 2020 - 12:24
