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kairo eixa na do edit sou boi.
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LuciferAMV wrote:
kairo eixa na do edit sou boi.
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Eyxaristw ! ma pws anebasa prin 2 mhnes mia mlkia me tragoudi apo sin boy !
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I liked some sequence which was pretty cool like at 1:12 but it feels like you just took the first cool clip and put it on your timeline. The pace was nice, there is no break in your editing haha
Still good luck in the ranking!
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PostSubject: Re: [ACTION]-AoNoFlamez-G.A.T.A.I   [ACTION]-AoNoFlamez-G.A.T.A.I Icon_minitimeSat 14 Mar 2020 - 15:14

The anime/song combo didn't make a lot of sense to me personally, however the editing makes up for it quite well, particularly in the second part of the clip where you pick up the tempo and make the atmosphere feel pretty hype as the music would encourage!

Cuts and sync feel decently dynamic throughout, though there's certain parts with little dabs of crossfades which I'm not a fan of, that type of transition rarely works for action imo and is probably best avoided. I would also recommend probably avoiding Impact if you can help it, there's much better fonts you could be looking at with the variety of free catalogues you can find online these days

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Hello

The video has some nice parts but felt inconsistent and lacked coherence. The association is a bit surprising and some FX come really out of place like the texts or the glitch backgrounds and on top of that they are quite messy. I also have issues with the overlay scenes you did, it usually doesn't blend well. But again, some parts were really on point, like around 1:13, the atmosphere was well captured. Unfortunately that didn't make me completely involved because of all the small mistakes, the overload of fades and overall lack of cleanliness.
Still a decent job, keep it up!
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