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My STICXVI entry;

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Editor: Dynamo
Music: Like It's Over - Jai Wolf
Source: Uchiage hanabi shita kara miru ka yoko kara miru ka
+ Eden, chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai, 5 centimeters per second, kimi no suizou wo tabetai, shakugan no shana, ef the latter tale, kaijuu no kodomo, Bakemonogatari, nagi no asukara, hibike euphonium, little busters!, tenki no ko, clannad
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Good romance video Nina, I like it, the only thing I want to say is that I think its lack dynamism. I would loved to see more impact on the drop. But overall it pretty nice, the video have a good atmosphere. Good luck ! [Drama/Romance] Catalyst 3772035131
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Sagiki wrote:
Good romance video Nina, I like it, the only thing I want to say is that I think its lack dynamism. I would loved to see more impact on the drop. But overall it pretty nice, the video have a good atmosphere. Good luck ! [Drama/Romance] Catalyst 3772035131

Thank you sagi; yes I think the same..I will work more on that aspect next time , and good luck to you too [Drama/Romance] Catalyst 653287824
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Hey Nina!

Pretty cool video, you captured the atmosphere quite well imo and I didn't think the rhythm was too slow or anything, pace was good and as diverse as needed imo. Even in terms of editing, when it might feel like it becomes repetitive, you put the right comp at the right time. However, I was not a big fan of your color correction that I feel is a bit too pushy, it could have given the same sepia/old effect without using such a strong filter. One other distracting point was some of the masks had quite blurry edges, but it's an IC so I understand the need for going a bit faster. I loved the typography you used, it was very well implemented.

Great video, very peculiar atmosphere and well rounded technique overall, congratz for 2nd place!
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PostSubject: Re: [Drama/Romance] Catalyst   [Drama/Romance] Catalyst Icon_minitimeSat 7 Mar 2020 - 18:48

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Hey Nina!

Pretty cool video, you captured the atmosphere quite well imo and I didn't think the rhythm was too slow or anything, pace was good and as diverse as needed imo. Even in terms of editing, when it might feel like it becomes repetitive, you put the right comp at the right time. However, I was not a big fan of your color correction that I feel is a bit too pushy, it could have given the same sepia/old effect without using such a strong filter. One other distracting point was some of the masks had quite blurry edges, but it's an IC so I understand the need for going a bit faster. I loved the typography you used, it was very well implemented.

Great video, very peculiar atmosphere and well rounded technique overall, congratz for 2nd place!  


Thank you for your comment ! I am so glad you liked it
About the CC , yes, I have tried to improve some things I was doing in the wrong way in my past amv but I will try to fix it and make something even better than this! Also about the blur, yes I wanted to fix it but had not really time, overall I am happy I was able to finish and send it to you.

Thanks a lot mdl!
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Ninaaaa! First congrats on your ranking it's well deserved
The atmosphere/mood was on point and some of your compositions was crazy good ( like the added fireworks on some scenes or the sequence between 1:21 to 1:36 ). Your color correction might be a bit too much and the end feels a bit slow but I don't care cuz I enjoyed your video nonetheless!

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Just wanted to drop by and give you a heart here as well <3 *good job*
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Ninaaaa! First congrats on your ranking it's well deserved
The atmosphere/mood was on point and some of your compositions was crazy good ( like the added fireworks on some scenes or the sequence between 1:21 to 1:36 ). Your color correction might be a bit too much and the end feels a bit slow but I don't care cuz I enjoyed your video nonetheless!

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thank you so much Luna chan <3
i will try to fix these issues next time. Love youuuuuuu
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Just wanted to drop by and give you a heart here as well <3 *good job*

thank you very very much GK, it means a lot to me! <3
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PostSubject: Re: [Drama/Romance] Catalyst   [Drama/Romance] Catalyst Icon_minitimeSat 14 Mar 2020 - 16:29

Really cute video Nina, I'll agree with the others that improvements need to be made as far as colour grading and pace go, but I'm sure you're already well aware by now. You've shown solid effort this IC and I'll be looking forward to see what you come up with next Wink
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