Hello,
The video is overall not bad, the scene selection in the first part was quite nice even though it becomes a bit more stale on the second part and especially regarding pace and impacts, I feel like you were missing good opportunities to make better variations.
But the biggest problem in the video was about visuals, you tried a lot of different things, some worked, but most felt a bit out of place and/or too much. Starting with these glitch bands at the beginning with black appearing on the side or the inverted scenes at 45s. You also use a lot of overlays and most are a bit unpolished like at 49s, it just doesn't feel adapted enough to the scenes.
And some masks are quite blurry, adding to it the wmv encoding, all of that made the video quite messy.
But it had definitely a nice atmosphere and some redeeming comps, I just wish it was a bit more controlled and clean. Keep it up!!