Hello,
You did right trying to personalize your video and make it stand out. However, while I enjoyed the comps and somehow the general idea between your scene selection, I feel like it lacked in terms of understanding the pace of the song. The calm parts are handled with a high flow, sometimes even faster than during choruses. It's also quite obvious you tried to give a more contemplative feel to the chorus part, which is not a bad choice but it ends up reversing the effect you'd expect to give: zoomed out scenes tend to give less connection to the scene and thus call for some less abstract scenes to add diversity and pace. In this video, the "face" scenes were almost always in the calmer parts so the choruses felt quite flat.
In terms of fx, I think your cam moves were a bit too strong sometimes, again, during calm parts, you needed slower ones imo. You also have very strong blurs that were a bit distracting. As for comps, there were fine but it's a bit of a pity that they're for the most part stacked in the beginning.
It was ok, good ideas overall but lacking a bit of control imo. Good job and keep it up!