Hello!
It looked interesting, I enjoyed the medieval setting and the comps you made worked well even though I think they could have been a bit cleaner on some edges. The typo were fitting and all the small fx details you added were helping the atmosphere.
The audio cut was a bit abrupt and repetitive but I enjoyed the final chorus, very dynamic and helped staying involved in the video. My only concern is that the Fate Assassin guy was not introduced early enough so he felt a bit too present at the end.
Good job anyways, atmosphere was cool, FX were nice, maybe some scene selection could be better and pace in the middle too but yeah still cool!