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Damn i used the same song and named the amv also motionless loool >-<
But good job c:
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It was quite cute, I see dance category had some really nice songs this year Smile
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Damn, I don't know you but dat vid is very good!!!
Maybe... top 3? lol

Just : GET A PROPER BANNER, SERIOUSLY XD
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Love it. One of my favs so far  [DANCE] Motionless - Bloosomangel10  3772035131 
Creo que hablabas espáñol no (? mucha suerte! <33
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for sure one of the best in dance o.o
everything in this video is perfect, idk what to say ahaha
good luck!
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Pretty cool, maybe there is lack of dynamics, but good job [DANCE] Motionless - Bloosomangel10  3772035131
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TheBeautifulCrap: wow haha i guess i wasn´t too original naming my video XD i just found it easier to name it as the song itself lol Wish you the best for the contest! ;3

EllipseIris, magicflier, Nyala: Thank you so much!

MimS: Thank you so much! and yeah... i shall XDDDD i made this banner in 3 mins, just took a screencap of my video and added text, pretty lame i know haha

[madaraxD]: Muchas gracias Mike! y si, hablo español, de hecho soy de España jaja Mucha suerte a ti también, aunque no creo que la necesites ;3 me encanto tu video <3

Luna: omfg! thank you so much <3 That really meant a lot! Good luck to you as well, loved your entry a lot!
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PostSubject: Re: [DANCE] Motionless - Bloosomangel10    [DANCE] Motionless - Bloosomangel10  Icon_minitimeWed 5 Mar 2014 - 18:23

some anime have a difference in quality but in general, it's quite a good IC !
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PostSubject: Re: [DANCE] Motionless - Bloosomangel10    [DANCE] Motionless - Bloosomangel10  Icon_minitimeWed 5 Mar 2014 - 23:05

Hello

I can see "a lot" of people had a crush for your video and it might have ended up lower than you could have expected because of these nice comments. I actually liked your video, it's a nice watch, relaxing and not agressive. What bugged me a little is firstly your choice of editing.

I can see you went with relying on using really similar scenes, like the hands at the beginning, the kisses at the end for example. That, usually, is a good idea, for here I (and it is personnal) think it was what dragged you video a bit down, because this lead to a too little variation of the plans. I'm not good at explaining it in English but in short, you ended up with too many close ups or the contrary and that's something that breaks your pace and movement management.

Another detail, your blurs were a bit too strong and unclean. Also this audio cut.. to me it sounded like it wasn't finished at all and that played a little role in my ranking too.

Of course not a bad video, there were some really nice transitions, colors and atmosphere but yeah I think it wasn't fresh and complete enough to push your rank forward. Keep it up anyways!
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