Olaaaa!
0:53 dissolve transition wasn't very pretty.
also i noticed, in the contrary of many editor who haves too much static elements, you have TOOmuch camera moves, it goes in all axes and position. it looks like when watching Blair project D:. just a linear move can make wonders, don't go berserk XD.
otherwise there's a bunch of varieties of transitions (unperfected, but quite an effort) and it's fine to watch. it ends a bit abruptly though ^^.
Good luck poggie !