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Lol, romance ¦>


I usually don't edit romance AMVs (it's my first ...) but I promised JadeCharm that I'll show her how it's done.
Now that I've finally done it, I'm quite happy with the outcome.

Give me some feedback if you want :3

Anime: Kotonoha no Niwa
Music: Taylor Swift ft. Civil Wars - Safe and Sound

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LUZ a phil with romance Very Happy
nice work thou digger Very Happy
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Teachings of how to do a romance video  [Romance] Lapskaus - Teachings of Life 1499845164 

simple but with very much feeling in it
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Guess what?
I love your anime choice! Wink
Well done Mr. "Alles Dufte"!
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PostSubject: Re: [Romance] Lapskaus - Teachings of Life   [Romance] Lapskaus - Teachings of Life Icon_minitimeWed 5 Mar 2014 - 5:08

the beat sync on the shoe drawing was a nice catch haha.

as for story i wasn't totally sure of the beginning, i think it would have made a cooler impact at the end.

your black fades are a little too fast and there was a bit of lack of sync in some beats i would have love to have seen used.

However, general quality is top-notch and the story-telling was a + for me. good ending with the shoes.

I had a good time watching it. I must check this movie ASAP.
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Well, this AMV is clearly too slow, I have some difficulties to appreciate it, even this anime looks beautiful, I think more dynamism couldn't be bad, gg for your participation !
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After watching the movie I have to say that your story telling is very legit. Gj on that!  true story 
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Nyala said everything, nevertheless good luck!
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PostSubject: Re: [Romance] Lapskaus - Teachings of Life   [Romance] Lapskaus - Teachings of Life Icon_minitimeMon 10 Mar 2014 - 3:48

Hello

I also go on Nyala's side. I also think the synch was quite inegal, sometimes good, sometimes you just let it completely drop. Also the accelerations looked really unnatural, shorter scenes and a bit more movement would have made it look better imo.

Good job
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