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PostSubject: [Action] [Danz] Live This Life   [Action] [Danz] Live This Life Icon_minitimeTue 4 Mar 2014 - 7:06

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Anime: Mardock Scramble

Song: From Ashes To New - Live Again


Hey Guys my entry for this year of the awesome IC of ST no much to say i have problems to make this video firts i was very hesitant that song to use second did not have much time to edit because i have travel the last day of the deadline  facepalm  but because after all y really like the final result of my video much raw but not bad  [Action] [Danz] Live This Life 556403049 
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Esperaba ver tu video Danz
not bad, overall the video is enjoyable, good luck
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For me, it's more static for this music and this category, sorry. I found that there is a lot of scene more long.
But it's clean.
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] [Danz] Live This Life   [Action] [Danz] Live This Life Icon_minitimeTue 4 Mar 2014 - 17:43

Well, there are many mistakes in your editing, like weird grain and useless FX. Your rhythm is unbalanced too ; maybe next time you can try edit your AMV without FX and just work the rhythm.

GG for your work man !
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] [Danz] Live This Life   [Action] [Danz] Live This Life Icon_minitimeWed 5 Mar 2014 - 17:40

same as darkel : you have static scene in-between scens with good flow so it totally breaks the rythm. and yeah, some fx which aren't enhancing the vid sometimes.


and i think i never understood a mardock scramble amv XD.


Still cool you managed to make it. good luck !
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] [Danz] Live This Life   [Action] [Danz] Live This Life Icon_minitimeWed 12 Mar 2014 - 21:12

Hello

It's not bad overall, though some effects are too forced on the vid like the grains at the beginning. And yeah as they all said, the editing could have been better, actually it's kinda inegal, you have some parts where the pace and synch look really nice, and some others with slow scenes and a bad understanding of the pace of the song.

Good job
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L'anime à l'air ouf quand même et la musique est juste parfaite. Même si le montage est moyen.
Good job^^
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