Hey!
I think it's the first time I've seen this anime edited, unfortunately I think it didn't really fit the song, or at least you didn't choose the right scenes. As for the editing, these superpositions are really a bad idea, it looks draft, not clean enough overall. There was a lack of rythm too and wtf with the audio cut at the end? xD The song was over already!
Anyways yeah, didn't like it much but it was a good idea, good luck!