lol ending.
Slow part was cool. And alterating the anime storyline was a good bet.
I wasn't a real fan of the font you used and of it was portrayed (repetition and twitch style on it), and a huge lot of scene lacked of traveling, there was too much static ones. Some scenes changed quite drastically of color palette, some filter could have helped.
But I'll consider the fact you edited an extremely hard anime to edit from. "Balls of Steel" award for this!