sakuraslight
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 Messages : 1 Registration date : 2013-02-24 ![[sentimental] sakuraslight mouth 2 mouth Empty](https://2img.net/i/fa/empty.gif) |  Subject: [sentimental] sakuraslight mouth 2 mouth ![[sentimental] sakuraslight mouth 2 mouth Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_minitime.gif) Sun 24 Feb 2013 - 21:14 | |
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Draga
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 Messages : 115 Registration date : 2013-02-13 | | Subject: Re: [sentimental] sakuraslight mouth 2 mouth Mon 25 Feb 2013 - 22:53 | |
| You should re-view your synchro because it´s not that good and especially your zooms , they were too strong and not smooth enough , good luck for the rest  |
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MagicDarkLight
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  Messages : 2082 Age : 30 Location : BELGIUM Registration date : 2007-08-22 | | Subject: Re: [sentimental] sakuraslight mouth 2 mouth Thu 28 Feb 2013 - 19:08 | |
| Hi! It's a pity, you just didn't follow the pace of the song at all xD The beginning is full of rough transitions even though it's just the calm part and then when the song gets faster the video just sloooows down xD I guess it's the IC but still, you shouldn't give it all in the calm parts, please keep all these cam moves for later  Also on a more technical side, some of your zooms weren't accurate enough and there was some "dezoom then zoom" on the same scene which happens to break the flow a lot. Good luck anyways! |
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