Yooo!
You did a good job overall, scene selection is fine, it's clear you know what atmosphere you want to create. I would regret only the color correction which can lack a bit of contrast and then some lack of accuracy on the synch, you miss some particular sounds like the riffs of the guitar that could have been hit with some glitches for example. In general I would say the synch should be a bit snappier.
Your impacts when the song picks up are good but could be stronger with more difference with the previous scene like at 34s, I feel like the burst could be better.
Still the video was solid, good job!