Hello,

Pretty good job of narration, it was surprisingly easy to follow despite a very raw editing, your scene selection really worked well. For the rest, except for that first "drop" at 40s that I think deserved a better synch, I thought it was decent, never really amazing but still good. Imo, it was a bit too raw to allow for more creativity in the editing but I respect the choice and I'd take it everyday against something less clean and controlled.

Good job and good luck!

Thank you for the thoughts