Hey,
Seems like the song drove you in a kind of hybrid of action/drama like some others in this catgory. That was refreshin, and quite original take on Cowboy bebop. Editing-wise, the scene selection was quite good and tells your story correctly but in terms of synch it seemed a bit off at some times, imo it could have been a bit more accurate. On the technical side, everything is quite simple and neat, I think it works well, I would only have a small complaint about the black/white FX which could have had a bit more contrast and the quick cuts at 1:18 that were a bit old-fashioned and might have worked better with a fancier comp.
Good job and good luck