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Lyon New
Messages : 6 Registration date : 2021-03-01 | Subject: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Tue 2 Mar 2021 - 3:43 | |
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MagicDarkLight Berserk
Messages : 2082 Age : 30 Location : BELGIUM Registration date : 2007-08-22 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Tue 2 Mar 2021 - 21:20 | |
| Hey!
One of my fav so far in action. As usual in your vids, synchs and impacts are really enjoyable, you fit the song to your scenes very well and it also has a great flow between them, I like how you play with the speed to master your flow. FX are exactly the right amount of glitch imo, never felt too much or too little. One complaint though, the quality isn't always very consistent but yeah that was a very good watch, good job! |
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Darksss 73 New
Messages : 10 Age : 37 Location : Россия Registration date : 2015-02-16 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 4 Mar 2021 - 2:12 | |
| The perfect dynamic between the calm part and the action. + liked the selection of music for all this. |
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Hatsuyo New
Messages : 27 Age : 22 Location : Bruxelles Registration date : 2018-02-25 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Fri 5 Mar 2021 - 12:03 | |
| Bravo Lyon, I really liked your clip, the fate scenes from the beginning are rare and really stylish and the flow is incredible! One of my favourite clips in action |
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Nyala Soul's Team
Messages : 5553 Age : 34 Location : Paris, France. Registration date : 2007-12-06 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Sun 7 Mar 2021 - 13:08 | |
| Hello Lyon ! It's a really enjoyable entry you did here, I loved the atmosphere you created during the first part by a very good scenes selection, very nice. The second part is very good too, I think it's a personnal opinion but I wished I felt more the "ZZZBBIIIOOOOOUUUUU" first instrument on your synchro (I hope you can understand what the hell I mean ) maybe by adding lightning or destruction scenes to feat with, the editing is still strong I'm pointing details. I'm not a big fan of the "This is Reality" composition, pretty sure that we can understand she was dreaming without it ; I would added the glitch effect on the text than the character and maybe work the background by adding some computer screens, cables, a lighting floor... like to recreate a simulator room ; just some ideas. A very great work, I had a bunch of things to say so I hope I was not so rough. Well done Lyon ! |
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Hedge Forum Member
Messages : 135 Age : 26 Location : Le dernier homme sur terre est seul dans une chambre et quelque chose cogne à la porte.. Registration date : 2014-02-24 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 11 Mar 2021 - 6:42 | |
| One of my favorites in the action category. On the first viewing I didn't understand everything but on the second I was able to analyze the little synchronizations hidden in the slightly faster part of the music. Your rhythm is really well managed and even if I'm not a fan of this kind of music, I still really enjoyed your clip! Nice job |
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Lyon New
Messages : 6 Registration date : 2021-03-01 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 18 Mar 2021 - 1:08 | |
| - MagicDarkLight wrote:
- Hey!
One of my fav so far in action. As usual in your vids, synchs and impacts are really enjoyable, you fit the song to your scenes very well and it also has a great flow between them, I like how you play with the speed to master your flow. FX are exactly the right amount of glitch imo, never felt too much or too little. One complaint though, the quality isn't always very consistent but yeah that was a very good watch, good job! Ty Mdl, quality was an big issue cuz the use of too much youtube downloaded videos for the most part i'll improve it for the next one hopefully! |
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Lyon New
Messages : 6 Registration date : 2021-03-01 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 18 Mar 2021 - 1:08 | |
| - Darksss 73 wrote:
- The perfect dynamic between the calm part and the action.
+ liked the selection of music for all this. Thank you very much! |
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Lyon New
Messages : 6 Registration date : 2021-03-01 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 18 Mar 2021 - 1:09 | |
| - Hatsuyo wrote:
- Bravo Lyon, I really liked your clip, the fate scenes from the beginning are rare and really stylish and the flow is incredible! One of my favourite clips in action
Ty suyo <3 |
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Lyon New
Messages : 6 Registration date : 2021-03-01 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 18 Mar 2021 - 1:40 | |
| - Nyala wrote:
- Hello Lyon ! It's a really enjoyable entry you did here, I loved the atmosphere you created during the first part by a very good scenes selection, very nice.
The second part is very good too, I think it's a personnal opinion but I wished I felt more the "ZZZBBIIIOOOOOUUUUU" first instrument on your synchro (I hope you can understand what the hell I mean ) maybe by adding lightning or destruction scenes to feat with, the editing is still strong I'm pointing details.
I'm not a big fan of the "This is Reality" composition, pretty sure that we can understand she was dreaming without it ; I would added the glitch effect on the text than the character and maybe work the background by adding some computer screens, cables, a lighting floor... like to recreate a simulator room ; just some ideas.
A very great work, I had a bunch of things to say so I hope I was not so rough. Well done Lyon ! Thank you very much for your comment! The concept of a simulation crossed my mind at first, but due to my inexperience with those kinds of environments and composition, I finally decided to go for something simpler. i'll take the advice to improve next time |
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Lyon New
Messages : 6 Registration date : 2021-03-01 | Subject: Re: [Action][Lyon] - [Dreamland] Thu 18 Mar 2021 - 1:40 | |
| - Hedge wrote:
- One of my favorites in the action category. On the first viewing I didn't understand everything but on the second I was able to analyze the little synchronizations hidden in the slightly faster part of the music.
Your rhythm is really well managed and even if I'm not a fan of this kind of music, I still really enjoyed your clip!
Nice job Glad you like it hedge! <3 |
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