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Anime: My Hero Academia
Music: Bring me the Horizon - Kingslayer (ft. Babymetal)

This is my video for action this year. It was a lot of fun but a lot of pain to finish as well. I hope you enjoy it even though it has some hiccups. All feedback is appreciated!
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Hello !

Cool video overall, could have had more work on colors, especially the ugly low-contrast parts when action is too flashy for the audience. It's also a bit too raw to really create the surprise, despite a good flow and nice scene selection overall. Maybe I would have seen stronger change of pace for the calm parts too.

Still a good enjoyable action, good luck!
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MagicDarkLight wrote:

especially the ugly low-contrast parts when action is too flashy for the audience.

Yeah i understand, i think only webrip is out and i neglected to fix it with cc, you are right.

Thanks a lot for the feedback MDL [Action] Li0n - Villainslayers   793914
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] Li0n - Villainslayers    [Action] Li0n - Villainslayers   Icon_minitimeSat 6 Mar 2021 - 15:18

Hello ! It's really a good entry you did LiOn !

It's dynamic and I love some good synchro like at 00:14 - 1:07 and 1:59, these 3 moments are really dope.
Personnal opinion, I'd choose maybe different scenes during some parts on your clip, by adding more scenes with characters walking/running (like the Mirio scene) with high camera movement, it feat really good with the synthe instrument.
I'm agree with MDL about the color correction, I have not so much things to say about your work, you did it very well and I hope you'll keep continue, gg [Action] Li0n - Villainslayers   3772035131
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Nyala wrote:
Hello ! It's really a good entry you did LiOn !

It's dynamic and I love some good synchro like at 00:14 - 1:07 and 1:59, these 3 moments are really dope.
Personnal opinion, I'd choose maybe different scenes during some parts on your clip, by adding more scenes with characters walking/running (like the Mirio scene) with high camera movement, it feat really good with the synthe instrument.
I'm agree with MDL about the color correction, I have not so much things to say about your work, you did it very well and I hope you'll keep continue, gg [Action] Li0n - Villainslayers   3772035131

Thanks a lot for the feedback Nyala, really appreciate it! [Action] Li0n - Villainslayers   793914
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The AMV is really clean and you mastered your editing very well. My two compatriots above mentioned the main flaws.

I really enjoyed it, great job!
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Hedge wrote:

The AMV is really clean and you mastered your editing very well. My two compatriots above mentioned the main flaws.

I really enjoyed it, great job!

Thanks man, glad you liked it!
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