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Hey!

Not bad, the editing was pretty solid. In terms of FX, I appreciated the efforts but the 2D overlays are a bit in your face, they could have been implemented better imo. Colors are also a bit bland, I think a little bit more contrast would have helped.

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MagicDarkLight wrote:
Hey!

Not bad, the editing was pretty solid. In terms of FX, I appreciated the efforts but the 2D overlays are a bit in your face, they could have been implemented better imo. Colors are also a bit bland, I think a little bit more contrast would have helped.

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Hello there, that's a pretty cool entry. I'll say the same about the 2D VFX, I recognize them, they are not really adjustable but you added them reasonably. I wished your final drop was edited with more rythme than the rest of your clip, but it's still solid, nice work man well done [Action] -Face in the Dark-Garrysheen 3772035131
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As MDL said the effects could be better integrated into the whole, I like the connections between the shots anyway. You did a good research of scenes and the editing is well done!
I like the AMV, however I find the end a little too abrupt.

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