Hello
I personally was more put off than amused while watching your video but I put that aside. The editing is clean enough, but the quality was indeed a bit weird as Luna said. The synch and pace are quite inconsistent, you have some nice parts and impacts but sometimes it gets very lacking, with some static scenes breaking your flow.
Same for lip synch, some lip synchs were actually cool but towards the end you have a lot of lip flaps that don't look good. In the smaller things, at 1:12 the visible black background is a bit surprising.
That definitely has some personality and good ideas here and there but base editing was too inconsistent imo. Keep it up!