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*kisses fingers* perfection

pretty cool work

Seriously became one of my favorite action videos instantly. Very nice man hope you place well

1:06
1:33

One of my favorite from the action category! The builds up in the second part and then the drop was damn amazing, and let me not start talking about your sync on some parts man, just shows how much I enjoyed it!

this is just such a solid action video ! and dude, from 1.30 and forward.. the sync is really great and I love how it hits with the heavy beats <3 the scenes with the eye looking at different ways as well is just.. godly.



good job for a ic video and good luck in the ranks <3

Also, now it looks like the scene is looking up to all the coments. perfect

Hello,

I see you had quite a lot of praise be it here or on youtube so I assume you must be a bit disappointed from your results and I am sorry for that. But I'll try to explain what happened.
First of all, you have to know we as judges kind of enjoyed your video, it's not like those that we watch and never remember anything good about.

You had a good understanding on how to cut your scene selection, the part at 1:33 is pretty solid and epic and the slow part around 1:55 also shows that. However, at the same time it's a bit lacking, like you had the first idea for each part and then you rely on it until you can't and your scene selection drops in quality be it because of camera management or pace inconsistency throughout. When we get to the final chorus, there's a clear lack of surprise effect and the editing is not perfect enough to keep us hooked.

In terms of visual, you left everything quite simple which is not bad but you also have some distracting issues. First the quick fades, some of them works well, others are just loading the screen too much. One of the fade/overlay is especially bothering around 1:12.
While most of your cuts work, it would have been beneficial to have some light transitioning for colors, some cuts are just changing the whole mood too much. And one additional detail but quite glaring at 1:48 the zoom out is very fast and small for such a change of pace, it feels odd.

Overall a video with redeeming qualities that can let you enjoy the video as it is but a lack of consistency and renewability, as well as some video-killers issue made it harder to rank high among video with similar level. Still a good job though so keep it up!