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Damn that was actually pretty good! I loved the sync and we don't get bored, really great job on the video! Just one thing bothered me, is the original scene like that or is it a mask :

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Damn that was actually pretty good! I loved the sync and we don't get bored, really great job on the video! Just one thing bothered me, is the original scene like that or is it a mask :

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thx for your like, luna. And that scene is a mask
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance-EREŠ.KI.GAL] SHINE FOR YOU   [Dance-EREŠ.KI.GAL] SHINE FOR YOU Icon_minitimeSat 14 Mar 2020 - 14:57

Some pretty good ideas in here, in particular the drop is quite strong and feels entertaining, scene selection for the most part is nice and nothing feels too much out of place.

As far as technique goes I would recommend you to pay more attention to your masking/keying and transitions, since the slower parts of the video suffer due to this. As Luna points above, it's probably better to skip the mask/composition altogether if it doesn't look realistic, as it breaks the mood of the clip. I would've also liked to see a colour scheme here, I think it's quite important for this type of AMV since it'll help you tie in all scenes into one cohesive universe.

It's a good start nonetheless, keep up at it!




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Hello,

It was a pretty cool job, very dynamic and with great transitions and flow in my opinion. The scene selection was well done and had enough variety, even in synching, it's never too repetitive and you renew the interest with different stuff like great lip synch or comps. But yeah, it wasn't always that clean in terms of masks and the color correction are especially monochromatic at times like at 59s or 1:11s for example.
There was one or two imperfections but overall it was really enjoyable and you could tell you put effort in making it dynamic and interesting. I enjoyed it, good job and keep it up!
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